Saturday, July 26, 2014

My Crush Loves Me


I and my best friend Cathy were having conversation in the hallway of our school when a man sudden passes by behind us.
My heart beats fast that I find it hard to breath. I felt like everything turns slow motion.
He’s Vil, my first crush and my first love, and my one and only love until now.
He’s really gorgeous and hot guy. I suddenly felt wanting to hug and kiss him. Yummy! Oops, I’m a conservative type; let’s stop this green minded feeling of mine. Erase, erase! I spin my head out of sighed.


“Sen, what’s happening to you?” my best friend Cathy asked me.
“Oh, this is nothing Cat, let’s get back to classroom we have a quiz today remember?” I just told her.
We are already in our classroom when I remembered that I forgot my book in the library where we had study just a while ago.
“Cat, I had forgot my book in the library, I will go back, I’ll make it fast”
“Ok, just make sure to come back before our teacher goes in” then I had run as fast I could after that.
There’s no one in the hallway so I run faster. But all of a sudden…
BLLLAAAGGGG!!!!
“Ouch!” I heard someone shouted after I hit something, or should I say someone? My head was in pain because of the collision. But it all goes away when I saw who I hit. I felt the rapid beat of my heart again.
Of all people here in school, why Vil? I was nervous and conscious. I felt my knees shaking and my body frozen. I was speechless. I want to cry and run away.

“I’m sorry” I said in a very low voice and tried to walk away, away from him. I was in my second step when he grabs me in my left hand. I felt some electricity flows in my veins. I look at him.
“Miss Sen”
I hate myself and my heart, please stop beating so fast I can’t breathe, I told myself. Wait, huh? What did he say? He knows my name?
I give Vil a penetrating look.
“I don’t know if this was the right time, but I know it’s an opportunity that I must grab.” He said again while looking at me intensely. I can’t get him, what is he saying?
“Miss Sen, can you be my girl? Because you had stole my heart ever since I laid my eyes on you two years ago, at our orientation day, first day of school.”

My tears fall into my eyes; I can’t believe I am hearing my love’s confession to me. It’s like a dream come true to me. All this time, we don’t know that we feel the same way. I want to thank my book because if I didn’t forget it, this thing will not happen now. I will assure that I will preserve that book in the future.
He hugs me after that. I was still in shock and his hug gives me more amazement.
“Please don’t cry, I Love You” he suddenly whisper in my ears
I hug him back “I Love You too the same day you love me” I said in tears of joy.
We heard a loud clapping of hands. Our schoolmates were watching us. It was embarrassing, but I think Vil was in heaven by the way he look.
“So are you already my girl?” ask Vil with almost teary eyed. It made me smile. I know Vil really loved me and he is sincere.
“YES!” I said to him and then we live happy ever after.

Note: Only narrated by the author.
© Copyright jbquiaoit 2014. All rights reserved.
Please do not steal any part of my original works.
Plagiarism is a crime.

Cute Love Story


At last, first day of school, I can see my crush again. 


He was a campus heartthrob. 

He was really famous in our school because of his very handsome face, a rich kid, varsity player of basketball and a very intelligent student. Almost every great thing was been already in him. He had no negative traits.

I am a very much opposite of him. I am not famous, just a simple and plain girl in our school. I am not also rich, I applied being a student assistant here in school and assigned to library so I can able to get study. I am not a sport type of person and an average student only.

I am already and fully aware that we can’t be together. I know he will never take a look at me nor notice my existence. I’d already accept my faith. I am already contented staring at him on a distance, because in my dreams he was my prince charming.



I was still in day dreaming while walking outside registrar’s office beside library where I was assigned, when someone approach me at my back.

“Hi Miss, can I ask you something” a very husky and sexy voice, and I am familiar with it. I face who was it and I was really shock. Ian? My crush! Yeah! Lord, thank you. You already made my day.

“I am sorry; I am not a school staff. You can ask inside the registrar’s office.” I pointed the office. I am shaking deep inside because of too much joy.

“It’s not about our school stuff, which I am going to ask” he said looking at me without blinking. It was a deep and intense look.

“Ahm.. Then.. What is it?” asking in shiver

“I just want to ask your name, because I think I fall in love with you the first time I laid my eyes on you”

All i can do was to make my eyes widened in amazement!

Note: Only narrated by the author.
© Copyright jbquiaoit 2014. All rights reserved.
Please do not steal any part of my original works.
Plagiarism is a crime.